GCSE Family Oral

Could somebody fluent in German read and check/correct the answers I have written for my German Oral Please?

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I am not fluent, but have studied German to A level and spent time living in both Switzerland and Germany.  Let me know if I can help? 
hellouk
14 November 2013
Hi there- I'm happy to do this if you still need help.  I have a degree in German and lived and worked there so should be able to help.  
Christine C.
12 December 2013
Hi there - as I said - I'm happy to help so drop me a line.  Christine
Christine C.
13 December 2013
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